Princesses in Peril

So here's the Yoshi Tf sequence i promised to post

Somehow the quality ain't that good this time...but I neither have the time nor am I eager enough to fix that...

This one was requested by

There won't be that many Tf artworks in the future, I guess
Becaus at the moment I'm really trying to practise my drawing skills in terms of positions, people grabbing something, difficult movements, hugging, kissing, etc. etc.
Because I'm still planning to do a Manga myself someday, but for that I'm still lacking the experience and the skills... and the patience

That's why in the future I will upload some non- TF artwork instead I guess, to get some feedback from you all
So I already ask you here: Please point out certain things I still need to improve and maybe also give me a little advice how to, maybe.

Thanks in advace
Until then, have fun with this sequence, cya

Rosalina TF: tfed-artist.deviantart.com/art…